October 21, 2011

Red - Flash Fiction Friday

(Source image: unknown title by
Beau Monde; website link broken)

Like so many times before, she sat intent on his voice, "Ten." All tangled up in herself, legs clenched, “Nine.” Breasts squeezed tightly, wrapped in the deepness of his voice, "Eight." Her stomach in a knot, cramping, “Seven.”
38 
Growling, tossing the headphones aside, still hearing his commands, “Six.” His voice taunting her, hyper-attuned, each breath twisting her arousal tighter, “Five.” Fire burning, hot, damp, nipples throbbing, aching, “Four.” 
68
Yanking the headphone jack out, still hearing, “Three.” Her fingers plugging her ears, shaking her head, ”Two.” Her legs twisted, burning thighs, suddenly in pained delight, ready, “One.” Then, “Now!!”
98


Your challenge is to use the picture to write a flash fiction of 38-98 words. I would also like you to please use this phrase in your submission: "...pained delight..."

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12 comments:

  1. I love this take on FFF. Fantastic, just fantastic!

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  2. I guess you have a thing for numbers. ;)

    That was very creative! Some of those feelings & emotions almost feel like the last 10 seconds before opening a door, knowing the one you want is on the other side.

    Happy Friday!

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  3. I like how she can't escape his voice and the inevitability of what's to come.. nice!

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  4. Very, very affective.

    "wrapped in the deepness of his voice", tangled, twisting, twisted, growling. You paint amazing pictures with your words.

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  5. what lm said...so tightly paced, tightly coiled, AMAZING what you can do with 98 words, David...

    i bow to the Master Wordsmith...*and grin coz, yanno, it's what i do...*

    nilla
    nillaswirled.wordpress.com

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  6. Very creative! Fantastic little piece. :-)

    Happy FFF!

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  7. Oh my, I am such a visual and aural person I can hear it in my head as I read that. It's like living it with her.

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  8. Wow. A spiraling ascent to ecstasy...i like the tight pacing, Sir.

    p

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  9. Wonderful take on this photo. I loved it.

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  10. Excellent work and lots of well deserved praise.

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  11. You've been nominated for an award. Check out my blog for details.

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