May 11, 2012

Chiquita - Flash Fiction Friday

click as she gets closer
I'd started snapping pictures from about 50 meters away. She was gorgeous, her bouncing breasts becoming more prominent, the closer she came. I could just barely hear her unintelligible song that was causing men's heads to swivel.

She playfully twirled her fingers through her hair with more than a hint of mischief as her other hand popped the buttons of her denim shorts. Now, just three meters away, in that singsong voice I hadn't understood, I heard her singing, “Gatito? gatito?”

Then, looking directly into my eyes she said, “Hey, chico, you wanna snap my kitty?”

Your challenge, use the picture above to write a flash fiction of less than 100 words. 
I would also like you to please use this phrase in your submission: "...a hint of mischief..."

Photo Credit: (Source image unknown, provided a long time ago by the lovely Lexi)


  1. Gatito! Love it! :-D

  2. I'll need a translation for Gatito...

  3. Very clever! This interpretation certainly didn't occur to me, but I can see how it looks like she's posing for photos. Well done.

  4. Sweets - Thank you ;-D

    Word - Thanks

    Treasure - Gatito - little kitten, kitty

    Jack/Jill - Thank you very much, I am glad you liked it, but I confess that posing for photos never entered my mind as I wrote this, I think the offer to snap her kitty had very little to do with photography.