Comments on A View from the Top: Book Store and Brussels Sprouts

Oh. My.

2009-07-09T19:46:53.717-07:00

Oh. My.

and yeah, did come back! I was in Montreal doing ...

2009-07-06T04:38:08.758-07:00

and yeah, did come back! I was in Montreal doing stuff on my mum's house (like building stairs! - did I mention I am a full service subby? LOL) - and had very limited access to internet so am catching up as work permits!

oh, I did notice he finally filled her hands LOL -...

2009-07-06T04:33:23.061-07:00

oh, I did notice he finally filled her hands LOL - but there is something about stuffing hands down jeans, fighting the unforgiving material and then feel that velvet, throbbing smoothness.

I do understand your conflict as I said. In this case, I think you capture it very well; and I think it unequivocal that while she is definitely conflicted, she is ultimatley acquiescent and willing - thus NOT rape nor assault.

David, it sounds like you had some conflict about ...

2009-07-06T04:13:49.166-07:00

David, it sounds like you had some conflict about the whole consenaul/non-consent issue; which is how I reacted when I read this. A combination of eroticism, overlaid with denial and discomfort with a stranger. Add to that my squeamishness for "public" displays (as opposed to 'safe" exhibitionism) and this left me conflicted.

Beautifully written of course.

AND, ic ouldn't help but think that when he took her hands and stuffed them down the back of her jeans, I would have preferred to have them stuffed down HIS jeans LOL

Very sexy, David. The constant potential for disco...

2009-07-04T09:07:41.079-07:00

Very sexy, David. The constant potential for discovery in such a public venue keeps me on the edge of my seat when I'm reading.

I am glad everyone enjoyed this. I have been cons...

2009-07-03T10:10:12.886-07:00

I am glad everyone enjoyed this. I have been considering this consensual non-consent notion for a while now, the Brussels sprouts flash back, actually was written at Thanksgiving.
I have been vacillating on whether or not to continue it. I am glad I did, and am pleased with how it came out.
I have to give meg-Persephone credit for a push of inspiration to finally decide to write/publish this.
And, welcome new readers.

*just finished reading all of the Imagineering - S...

2009-07-01T06:47:22.477-07:00

*just finished reading all of the Imagineering - Stories*

You are such a talented writer. I am in awe and very turned on! What a lovely way to start the morning.

Thank you.

Now that is erotica. Oh, my. Well done. ~ Ellie

2009-06-30T17:51:12.828-07:00

Now that is erotica. Oh, my. Well done.

~ Ellie

Oh my lord, that was intense. Why haven't I been r...

2009-06-29T20:12:54.205-07:00

Oh my lord, that was intense. Why haven't I been reading you before now?!

And yes you were right, Mt Charleston! =)

Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

2009-06-29T12:29:21.341-07:00

Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

Beautiful

2009-06-29T01:56:22.912-07:00

Beautiful

wonderfully written! but, true to my name, as Dad...

2009-06-28T19:09:03.487-07:00

wonderfully written! but, true to my name, as Daddy calls me "a greedy kitten," I'm wanting more interaction with this mysterious man.

Bravo!!

um. Yeah, wow! I don't know what else to say, so...

2009-06-28T11:53:14.547-07:00

um. Yeah, wow! I don't know what else to say, so many thoughts at once. They all start with wow.

Eating Brussels sprouts will never be the same aga...

2009-06-28T08:24:27.544-07:00

Eating Brussels sprouts will never be the same again!

Hugs,
Hermione

Lovely! katie

2009-06-28T08:00:15.035-07:00

Lovely!

katie

David, I just have one word..... wow!=) Hugs, El...

2009-06-28T05:35:53.224-07:00

David, I just have one word..... wow!=)

Hugs, Elle