tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6931377820241721982.post5361013586698652121..comments2023-04-12T04:11:40.082-07:00Comments on A View from the Top: Always Remember - Flash Fiction FridayDavidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04943867226010869367noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6931377820241721982.post-67784861636234130232010-12-05T22:24:38.027-08:002010-12-05T22:24:38.027-08:00Again, thank you all.
I think that is one of the ...Again, thank you all.<br /><br />I think that is one of the opportunities of length limited writing, you can either write a small "complete" story, or write a story that leaves the reader wondering, or imagining their own ending.<br /><br />I appreciate the kind words, and acceptance.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04943867226010869367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6931377820241721982.post-58372337350658612802010-12-05T16:49:21.035-08:002010-12-05T16:49:21.035-08:00Why when she said "no, no, no," was I he...Why when she said "no, no, no," was I hearing "yes, yes, yes@" ? Forceful, but not overdone. Very nice.<br /><br />RozewolfAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6931377820241721982.post-86486404495354832622010-12-04T12:56:49.950-08:002010-12-04T12:56:49.950-08:00Very HOT! Left me wanting more...Very HOT! Left me wanting more...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6931377820241721982.post-51071955547511905782010-12-04T08:27:06.095-08:002010-12-04T08:27:06.095-08:00I like the forcefulness of the writing. Nice job!
...I like the forcefulness of the writing. Nice job!<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by my FFF. :)Lusting Lola!https://www.blogger.com/profile/11435548846827420600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6931377820241721982.post-47912326272517951022010-12-03T20:36:36.472-08:002010-12-03T20:36:36.472-08:00You are very good at these flashes of fiction Davi...You are very good at these flashes of fiction David. This one is a master,writing from the womans viewpoint, will you finish it please. These few words have me a little hot and bothered.<br /><br />Lxlittlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12636494035951808803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6931377820241721982.post-297260211509187542010-12-03T18:00:34.434-08:002010-12-03T18:00:34.434-08:00Loved it.Loved it.jenfroghttp://www.frogburrow.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6931377820241721982.post-16670563448509393342010-12-03T14:34:04.446-08:002010-12-03T14:34:04.446-08:00oh, delightful! i really liked your use of the req...oh, delightful! i really liked your use of the required phrase, and the tautness of "consensual non-consent" within the framework of the word limit.<br /><br />a very erotic story.<br /><br />nillanillahttp://vanillamom.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6931377820241721982.post-66949672356567291572010-12-03T14:33:03.185-08:002010-12-03T14:33:03.185-08:00OL - thank you, yes, leaving it up in the air is o...<b>OL</b> - thank you, yes, leaving it up in the air is often more interesting than an explicit result.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04943867226010869367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6931377820241721982.post-29132258701868983462010-12-03T13:18:59.254-08:002010-12-03T13:18:59.254-08:00The coupling does seem to be, at first, not-so-mut...The coupling does seem to be, at first, not-so-mutually desired. Still, the writer merely describes what happened without judgment. Was she eventually persuaded? Maybe. Is the scene hot? Absolutely. Fantastic job.Over&Outhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01627668654006196367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6931377820241721982.post-86673540706924457142010-12-03T13:09:22.656-08:002010-12-03T13:09:22.656-08:00Sweets & Drench - but I ran out of words!!
Le...<b>Sweets & Drench</b> - but I ran out of words!!<br /><br /><b>Lexi</b> - well, the actions of the man were not to be approved of, but interesting that it got dewy - I think fear and violence can feed a certain animal appeal.<br /><br /><b>Panser</b> - but wouldn't a man be cavalier about her demurrals when he is forcing her "against her will". I place that in quote simply to acknowledge the potential for consensual non-consent.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04943867226010869367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6931377820241721982.post-80688143439394967112010-12-03T08:31:20.133-08:002010-12-03T08:31:20.133-08:00Ah, good, I was hoping somebody would use "s...Ah, good, I was hoping somebody would use "scratchy and roughened" for his stubble instead of using the barn door. Urgent, this one, though a bit too cavalier about her demurrals. Still, nice piece. Thanks for joining in this week.<br /><br />-- PBThe Panserbjørnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10643891392421573706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6931377820241721982.post-35094719519494593642010-12-03T07:36:22.507-08:002010-12-03T07:36:22.507-08:00"His hot hard persistence" is a great ph..."His hot hard persistence" is a great phrase. I'm not sure whether I approve of the actions of the man in the piece, but it's very well expressed and makes me a bit dewy whether I do or not. Perhaps that's the point. Anyway, it captures an aspect of the picture quite well.Naughty Lexihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11273411739011393369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6931377820241721982.post-79715584594870045252010-12-03T06:58:30.039-08:002010-12-03T06:58:30.039-08:00Yeah I agreee with the Tempting one, more please.....Yeah I agreee with the Tempting one, more please...Drenchxoxohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05835102768082256723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6931377820241721982.post-75465063744218757552010-12-03T01:44:19.392-08:002010-12-03T01:44:19.392-08:00more please. ;-)more please. ;-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com